Regjistruar: 02/12/2004
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sometimes

sometimes it feels so irritating
this life i'm living is worth nothing
sometimes i can't stand it, not anymore
this situation makes my heart sore
sometimes i feel my life is just a bad dream
i wanna wake up and scream
sometimes i wanna run as fast as i can
to never, ever live this dream again
sometimes,
sadness enters deep into my heart
and breaks it
then, a flush of happiness, collect the pieces
and like glue
stikcs it together
but only to break again....

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if u want to read more of my poetry just send me a message
and tell me wah u think of this one

this one is not mine but it's awsome

if home is where love is
and love is where trust is
then, i guess i'm homeless

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why you call it "dark poetry"? what do you mean?

PS: are you homeless? Go to Social Security to complain

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1. dark because if u read it carefully it means something dark like suicide, not that i intend to kill myself but it's a veyry good topic to write about.
ih, and another word for dark poetry maybe more like gothic
2. no i'm defenitely not homeless and if i was i would write happy poems, instead of dreadful messages to my life w/ my family

here is my newest poem i made yesterday while i was trying to get my head to concentrate on algebra review....




Alone

In some flatted sight
Stuck in the dimness
Seeking for some motion
Stands a cheerless girl
Lonely, like you…

She’s trapped in a cube
In replicated dimensions
Emulated lost sunlight
Solid and frozen background
And yet fogged by absence…

Love and life sucked away
By the omitted air that
Was desperately never there
Days and nights go by and by
Still, she’s lonely and hiding….

Hiding from what? No one
There’s nobody in that reach
To talk and comfort her
No sound, no whispers
Like you, she needs somebody…

So,
Look on that flatted reality
Push away the mist
Shift the picture in her eyes
And shoot the breeze….

Talk to her
Wipe away her fears
Give her your care
And your affection
For she is your reflection…

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I love Gothic literature too. If you would can see my room at home is full of books about stories of vampires. I was going to ask for your age but I checked your profile and I see you are 14 years old. I love what you write -out of that I think it is good or not- because I used to write things like that too and want to kill myself too all the time but I thought: why to kill myself??? why not to kill the whole world?:p... so I became vampire!:p
I guess you are following the same process that I did. So good luck and continue writing!!! but above all READING!!! - at the end you will be expert in authors that nobody knows -

GOOD JOB!

ps: just by casuality... do you paint, sculpt or do something related to art? :p

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yes, i do. in fact i draw with my pencils(casually i may use red). i draw vampires and blood and names in a gothic way. my favourite color is black( DUH!!) and red is ok.
my room is dark. no light, covered w/ posters of vampires and well, now we're buyin a new house and my mom doesnt want me to b so dark and everything so she's painting my room walls pink! i mean seriously, PINK?!
I HATE PINK!!!!! well, i dont care. i dont want their room, i'll take the basement as long as there's no light going through it and it's dark and comfy.
technically, i am 14 but i will be 15 in less then a month so ... yeah i like to be called as 15 year older. being 14 has made me go through things i want to 4get.
but amazingly enough, this may come as a surprise to u, i have never thought of killing myself. of course i do have dark thoughts in my mind but never suicide. i'm not saying life has been nice to me but somehow i have been so mad that i have promised my self revenge, therefore more satisfaction. dying isn't going to solve anything.....
i've had some friends who are by the way very suicidal but i have learned from their mistakes...
yet i must admit: suicide and death r a cool topic to write about...
i do not agree, however that u can become a vampire. y? don't ask me. u know it. (this is the same way i try to comfort my self over not being a vampire)
i will certainly continue to write and read although i do not expect to become an expert on the books author..lol!!
y don't you tell me some more about yourself... so u know.... i can relate more easily. i know 4 fact that u r a girl. guys r 2 dumb 2 go after this stuff.

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sitting in the dark,
in this very black night.
shivering in the cold,
in this freezing winter.
listening to the wind,
cutting his sharp feature.
the wind twists and touches
the leaves and they with him
tremble...
hissing and moving on,
the wind is fullof life,
unlike that lonely boy,
who is standing,
wondering,
listening,
remembering,
staring...
at a point?
a memory?
life?
his hair so silver.
skin so pale,
like showered by the moonlight.
eyes so black.
black jeans,
black shirt,
black old leather jacket,
black everything...
he's blacked out
shined by the soft vague
moonglow....
thinking so hard,
trying to remember,
when he was really living,
was he happy then?
it used to be so different.
now, all the time, it's cold
and his sight can catch
only the darkness andblackness
of the lonely cold night.
and forever he'll keep freezing.....

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Opening my eyes,
I badly try to see
a shadow on the rise
right in front of me.

I stare at the creature
wrapped in dark mist,
shaping its own feature;
Grabbing my fear with her fist.

I look at her face;
Silent, iced, merciless eyes,
love, trying to erase,
filling them with despise.

She’s fearless and mean.
A demon in my sight.
Like I have ever seen.
Living from my fright.

A black angel, so dark.
Evil is rapidly gaining.
Leaving no mark,
goodness is fading.

She lets out a shrill, a fragile shiver
there’s a cut, red tears on the floor.
Blood on her hand, flows like a river.
She’s marked; she’s good no more.

She looks at her reflection,
so herself she can see,
she looks in my direction
because she is me.






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so do u like it? i mean it's not so vampirish but it's worth it...

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Citim:

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Po citoj ato që tha vampirechick
yes, i do. in fact i draw with my pencils(casually i may use red). i draw vampires and blood and names in a gothic way. my favourite color is black( DUH!!) and red is ok.

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great! open a theme with your drawings in Rruga artistike in the section of Arti Figurativ and show me what you do . hmmm what do you exactly want to know about me? ask me and I will answer. About your poems, I miss sexual scenes in them. Vampirism is very related to sex

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well, yea but i do not write about sexual realtionships in my vampire poems. sorry to dissapoint u but i just dont find that interesting enough to write about...
i do not however "skip" books on the topic; actually i enjoy them very much.i dont know, maybe i'm not talented enough to write about it.

about my questions, there would be no specific ones. just to tell me where u live and the age. i like to talk to people i know some things about, u know, people i can relate...

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